Work on that intro
I'm not sure what going on during the first minute of the song. It sounds like you have some good pads but theres this weird cutting out noise in my left headphone. It sounds like the pads could be really interesting but it is really hard to hear.
Try to work on the strength of your sounds so they sound epic and trancey and you will be on your way.
Yea I dont have eny headphones at the moment beucase i made this on crapy comp speakers so i dont here it properly. That is why it probbaly sounded wired at the bigning.