I listen to this and see an overview of a cold, lonely city in a fading dusk.
Nothing seems out of place or off key. The strings sound fine to me; the strength of them defines the lonely visual. Excellent work.
My only problem with this is what everyone else has been saying.
Lovely, its like a hip hop love song. Very nice to listen to and i'd say yes, turn down the strings a little bit. They are a bit over modulated but other then that its fine. Keep on it as this is a rather nice song!
Thanks and yeah they are a bit too loud aren't they? :D