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Author Comments

The song was made because i have a friend who keeps on attempting suicide.
and also i might make a music video if its any good



the arthor coments bumed me out


The drums are incredibly disappointing. The sounds aren't good and they aren't very well written.

I'd be a hypocrite by deprecating you for using FL Slayer; However, you could have done a lot better job getting it to sound closer to a real guitar. Let this just be a note, rather than a critique, because I know it's hard to emulate guitars.

There was really only one melody in this, just occasionally thrown onto different instruments. Additionally, the melody made me feel like the genre of this should be more like "Typical Rock" Instead of General Rock.

It was pretty good. Nice job.

dammit-dude-2006 responds:

yeah, tis true :P


It was a pretty good song, the guitar had a nice melody to it. The fast pace of the song and the transition from synth back to guitar at around 2:05 was kind of cool and set the mood that you were trying to give. The biggest change that needs to be made here is the percussions I think. There was only one noise there throughout the entire song, I think you can do better then that.

Overall it was a very good song with some nice fast paced actiony guitar sounds. I hope you're friend stop trying to commit suicide =/

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dammit-dude-2006 responds:

he did about 2 years ago :P thanks for the good review
i made a couple mistakes in the thing with the drums.

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Credits & Info

3.38 / 5.00

May 15, 2008
4:44 PM EDT
General Rock
File Info
5.9 MB
2 min 35 sec

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