the drums start too early.
It's not bad, okay, it's bad, but it isn't horrible. Try starting the drums a few seconds later and move the melody closer to the beginning... if there is a melody.
This is my third submission to the audio portal, so I realize it's far from perfection.. What am I saying? Light years away from it. Nevertheless, I boldly confront you, the audio listeners, ready to take your criticism, so I can improve myself.
the drums start too early.
It's not bad, okay, it's bad, but it isn't horrible. Try starting the drums a few seconds later and move the melody closer to the beginning... if there is a melody.
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