pour a little heart in it
try to sound more enthused like your actlly pouring sum part of u into the song and perfect your lyrics try looking at a thausorus sounds lame as fuck but maybe u can find another way to get your point threw worded difrently i liked the bg music though
I have really seen rap like this on newgrounds
kind of annoying
I wish lyrics were provided
So it'd make my job of showing how this sucked easier.
Ok so yeah Sittin under the oak tree waiting for................huh????????
the guts and glory thing at beginning was lame also
Not to mention that this song overall was just boring, nothing really clever or perhaps mediocrely clever. I could sense a stumble in your flow at some points anothering thing no racism intended but you sound like just about every other white boi who wanna be a rapper. I also have to question if you have happened to experienced the shit you spittin for example if I have to cock it back and all that crap......
.I couldn't really Unleash the fury on this sucky song because I just came from doing so with another song which was actually better than this one in my opinion but whatever yah....This was......not a pleasant experience I can't even listen to the whole thing where its so lame...Im not trying to offend you just trying to tell you to step your game up or get the fuck out!!!!!!!!!
No hatin just sayin .
P.S~~~~~Flaming me won't ease the Third Degree burns.
cool! i wish i could be like you. maybe........you could spit some shit and i could hear how terrible you are! wow! that would be great. seeing that you should go shoot yourself.
thanks for playing. you lose.
I CANT LIE BUT ITS REALLY GOOD
BUT IT JUST NEEDS MORE INSTRAMENTS YA GET ME
sure...but next time lets talk about the lyrics to!
the worst noise ever lyrics suck ass too dnt quit ya day job son
wheres your trax? oh wait. you aint got shit. hater.