It sounds nice but
It's just a bunch of preset sequences and such. It's not bad to use them, just try and use them in a manner that doesn't make it sound so amateur. You could build a real melody on top of this. Just turn the sequences down a notch or two and create something. It's a good start nonetheless, it just needs more of yourself in it and a little less Fruity Loops' stuff if you know what I mean.