This is an odd song, slow at start and builds, not a lot of other sounds and 2 mins might have been a little long, Keep in mind Notes, and keys, Stay in the "7" key line
A, B, C, D, E, F, G
Good idea to Find Middle "C"sharps are cool but use to make Darker tone songs
now deeper Tones are lower tone to dubble up on higher Tones, like in key of 4 "C" i would play higher notes about one or two above it 5 or 6 "C" lol its all good im not a pro at music, lol keep in the "7" max key Range and your songs will sound Really good! keep going at it and alway Keep at it! i would Wiki music theroy
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