Ok, this is a bit odd, ill give a vote of 3.
thanks for the listen
It really wasn't that bad, but you just edited it in a very bad way. The kicks were far to loud, they are something you would want in the background just keeping a beat and not trying to stand out. The bass also should have been much louder consider you had no synth to really back up the track. Don't let kicks take priority over the bass if you don't have any synth because that makes for a very boring and repetitive song.
I would just recomend keeping this track handy, and editing in some synth because you have a great background tune here. Just on it's own it is a pretty useless track.
thanks for the advice i will definitly edit it thanks for listening!