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(Andiron) Move With It

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Author Comments

This is my third song and I hope my best. I put a lot of time into it but there is still something missing to it... I don't know what but please, listen, review, and give me some feedback.

Thank you

Reviews


great

its not ur best
still
very mellow
which i dig
but its still missing a bit of expression
needs jazz XD



You need a counter-melody

This is a great trance song.

What I think you are missing from this piece is a "partner" melody to run along-side your existing one. It sounds awful lonely all by its lonesome, and in a way, erratic.

The second voice would work like.... An owner holding a dog on a leash, the dog (1st melody) leads to way but the owner (2nd melody) keeps it in line and gives it proper direction.

I would make it the same sound wave, but maybe alter it slightly.

Kepp up the good work,

"Zo."



nice

i like it aswome


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Credits & Info

KBen
Author

Listens
891
Downloads
89
Votes
30
Score
4.37 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 11, 2008
5:55 PM EDT
Genre
Trance
File Info
Song
5.7 MB
4 min 8 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.