I liked the bass sound, nice and dirty. Also the intro was kinda atmospheric, which I liked, but it just kind of cut off. That synth line does overpower the rest a bit, and I don't think it changes much, if at all. Bring up them Drums and Bass a bit more. they're kinda monotonous, and could've used a bit more depth. All in all though, it really wasn't bad, just needs a bit of work.
Lookin forward to a new version!
Thanks for your critique. The synth was supposed to be coherent with the bass but I couldn't manage the peak controller. Working on another song, When I get better I shall make a Vapor Mix.