so i kinda liked that twangy thing in the beginning, but when the rest of it came in, it is way off in terms of harmonizing and it is incredibly muddy. overall the whole peice is quiet and loopy and does not harmonize at all. i did like the hip hopish beat but you need to raise up the volume! look up compression teqniques and learn about harmonizing :)
Almost like its half a song.
Realy, its a good beat but seems a little too quiet. Other then that, this sounds like something you would put as the background to a Rap or R&B song.