First Review Goodies
This should be mastered, The basses are stacking and treble is to high. Your parameter is probably in red a lot. You used the sample oldschool in FL7. thats oke , but you should have remade it a bit. Add some reeverb or something. I missed some high notes in it ( the pads are semi ) . Some high syths in the back would do nice.
Nice job on the voice sample. And bass melody is also nice. To bad it has such a bad treble on it.
Overall not really bad.
Thanks and I'll take your words of advice. I'll remake and update...
Edit: Remade and updated.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.