This is one of those songs where it seamed like you tried a bit to hard to make something new and original. It wasn't bad, I thought it was fun to listen since you mixed things up a lot throughout the song but overall it just seamed very chaotic and cluttered. The sections of the song just didn't flow together at all, what it seamed like was that I was listening to a bunch of loops played side by side to eachother. Maybe you should try taking some of the best parts of this song and turning them into loops because they just do not fit together enough to make a good song.
Thats cool. It's just that the last song I made was really gud and I wanted to try and recreated it
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.