great.

An excellent attempt, all it needs is more chords to make it hit that sweet spot.

Great Game

If you haven't heard of this game play it or watch video's on youtube. It is an amazing game he has the music down pat except for something is missing.

Epic

Raptor: Call of the Shadows is my favorite Apogee game, and this remix is just beautiful.

It's on tone, it has a great beat and the instruments fit awesomely (Is that even a word? It should be.) You get my congratulations.

Godspeed.

Good start

I'm not familiar with this song so I can't judge the accuracy of it, but I think it sounds pretty nice throughout. I'll agree with the others it was a bit short but mostly I found a problem with them dynamics. If you added dynamics to this piece I think it would sound miles better, ie. a fading decrescendo during the sixteenth runs. Also I would love to hear maybe a bassline or cello section to support the melody. Good work keep the music flowing.

def agree w/ everyone else

you should def make this longer...and by my opinion lose a bit of the 8bityness, make it more "orchestral?" or less stacatto'd