I can do copy from this with FL studio in no time... pls not say that this is very good.. it sucks more than my lil brother samples by FL. -___-'
I give 1/5 1/10 for trying.
It's an improvement.
but not by much. Your going to have to get away from using Sytrus. I mean, it's not that it's bad, its actually good, but it's just been used and abused by EVERYONE!!!
In fact, if you want, I know where you can get some good free ones that you can mess around with (yes they have presets).
As for this being under "techno", I don't think so. I mean, there was no actual drum beat to speak of, and there was no melody. But, as for you just starting out, it's not bad... Except for the use of Sytrus.
Anyway, I'll keep checking in to see how you improve!