nice track AO
this is some good heartfelt shit man, matches well with the beat.
cant wait to hear more from ya man.
keep it real!~
-Pop Rock of DDE
Thanks dude, let me know for a collab!
this is not bad man
Nice words man! this is slick! i realy like the beat... and the flow was really good. it like has a nice meaning. this is really really good! keep it going. your Spit is like Stright on point! nice
really keep this kind up!
if you need people to make beats for your next song lol look me up!
Thanks bro, i'll mos def check your page. thank you for the pos review!
It's real nice
I love the lyrics, real touching man. What I like is there's not a boatload of cursing, or the n-bomb, no shittalking. its nice and from the heart. Rap is not my area, but from what I hear your flow is pretty good and you have a good rapping voice. Some more FX on your voice (but not overdone, just at some points) like a louder reverb, or an echo would be great for the diversity of the song.
Did you make the beat too? It's very good, very smooth and mellow which goes with the lyrical themes. I love the percussion in the start, and the beat is nice. I think the beat could have more definition and maybe more subbass since there is no bassline in here. I like the string progression too, itts a great backup to the vocals.
I dont see why its voted so low...i thought that was a great rap. 5'd and favorited!
Thank you so much! It's downvoted prolly cause im not swearing every other word, not shit talking, or because its not mainstraim shit, also no one can get rid of 0 bombers. Glad you enjoyed it, i really apprecitate it!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.