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If you dont like this song than you can stick it up my ass with all the other complaints because noone likes it
but seriously if you really dont like it you might as well review and tell me why

0's are for FAT PEOPLE

so if you have a heart, please vote 1 if not then go ahead and 0 me you dumb Kawasaki foo yung watermelon smeller

if you like than vote 5 !
reviews are sweet, bad or good, well good are better

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Ok, first of all, your author comments section does not leave a good first impression of you as an artist. You should probably simply say you're still improving and any criticism would be appreciated instead of completely bashing any reviewer before they even hear the song. Now to the music:
You've got some work to do. Melodically, well, there was no real discernible melody or harmony. It really sounded like you just kinda plinked some notes in a sequence and called a song (which technically could work if there was some structure to it). Secondly, what's with the sudden pause in the middle of the track? Then that third synth just pops out of nowhere and then the song returns to the previous theme. Really, this could work if you just put some more work into it. Add some effects, some more parts, and structure. This song, as it is right now, is soulless. Ok, now for the not so mean part: The best advice I can give is don't give up. Listen to all kinds of music to help you with ideas and maybe inspire you, and lastly, don't be offended by objective criticism. If the person criticizing you means well, you should take the advice into consideration rather than flaming them for not liking your music. Hope this helps, and good luck.

ILIKEVIDEOGAMES responds:

see i left comments like that for like all my other songs but i got sorta bored with it and decided to make something more interesting,
and thanks for the other stuff too, this is the longest reveiw iv got, and i appreciat that and a 4 isnt to bad, right?
i was complaining about the zeros bc i dont really think anthing that involved effort deserves a zero, a stolen copyrighted song deserves a zero, not just any crappy song, i think more people should round it up to one

Credits & Info


Listens
648
Downloads
86
Score
Waiting for 4 more votes

Uploaded
May 5, 2008
4:38 PM EDT
Genre
Techno
File Info
Song
1.8 MB
1 min 56 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.