Very nice

So this piece was pretty decent I was not too fond of how you started this out maybe it was the tempo of it all seems like it needed more of a kick to it I do like the rythem of it all it does have some nice and solid sound you do some really nice building onto this with a solid vibe about it maybe adding more to the start of it would be one suggestion of improvment but anyways this was a decent tune here and I do look forward to more from you

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As mentioned above but overall a good tune

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not ur best...

but still a 10/10 this was awesome.the kick was too strong.

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I love the slow opening to the trance!
the kick is great..
there is some sounds i dont wanna have there but still
awesome! :D

Hellooooooooooo

They say good things come to those who wait, so I hope you'll enjoy my amazingly late review.

The beginning is promising. The pad is a bit raw, I'd suggest you to slap a wee little low pass filter on it for a smoother, more pleasant sound. Reverb should do great too. The small details and sfx add a great lot of depth, don't be afraid to pump the tune full of them.

It's weird how it changed so abruptly from the mellow beginning to a typical cheesy tune - seriously, detuned saws with a basic four on the floor for a beat - I mean, it works, but so many songs are built around those two elements. It's misleading though, it changes FAST into something more enjoyable. And that's good (watch out for the off-tempo drums at the 1:00-1:02 transition, a very minor flaw).

Cool, some new part now- a weird kick drum and a plunky little synth bass introducing a piano. Perfectly balanced reverb, I'd say- not too much, but enough to make the original sound a lot richer. Nice. What's up with 1:42-1:44 though? O.o

Then it wanders around a bit, alternating between the different part while still keeping the decent flow.

It's a pretty good song, it's just a lot of minor things that could need improvements:
- Work on the transitions - especially in the beginning- at some parts there's a noticeable silent area between parts that disturb the flow of the track
- Mixing - It isn't exactly clipping, but there sure is some peaking around. Did you put a compressor on the master track or something? Drag some of the master volume sliders down, and it will sound much better.
- The detuned saw synth - it just sounds incredibly generic. :) Try adding just a bit more filtering, chorus or reverb, preferably all of them.

Note that I am overly picky when reviewing and mainly focus on where to improve. It surely was an overall enjoyable tune with a lot of potential. Good work!

Alright

Intro was good, the sudden tone/mood change threw me off
Would have preferred it keeping the same pitch
still a nice effort