I can't say I honestly enjoyed this one too much :(
-The composition itself is actually very nice. Nice placing of notes, the section at 00:43 was nice and relaxing
-The pad that you use is okay, goes with the serene melodies, its got a nice soft texture
-The drums need to be taken out. They dont the track any good. The beat is boring and extremely simplistic. Plus the samples are lame, try searching around for more acoustic oriented or better dance samples. Also, make sure your beat is quantitized (snap to line)
-Although the notes are nice, you need to add more in here or elaborate more on the right hand melodies. the E-C notes get old, try a different combination like E-C-F and split the length up of the C note.
-Your synth seems overall muffled and low quality. A bit more reverb might help withe dryness, and a sharper EQ might polish up the sound.
Ideas: 7/10 Diversity: 7/10 Clarity: 5/10 Overall: 6/10
some decent playing in here, but it needs some refurbishing. I hope my tips help!
well, I hope my criticisms help!
aright ill keep it in mind thnx man :P
nyce, like the slowness and amienceness, put under genre ambient lol