Awesome for your first time, you're a real talent and i think we'll see alot more of you in the future, btw, don't use the demo version of Toxic, it's highly annoying im afraid :P
Shame though, since toxic has such perfect sounds.
This was bad,
Your should learn how to raise up the levels so it has better clarity. Also, the track was a little repetitive, you should try to shorten it a little.
yea... it was my 1st beat... go figure XD
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.