submit finished work
This definitely does have an interestingly dark side to it. I liked the original sound to the track a lot. This would make a good song for a flash movie.
I found the break at about 2:27 to be a little weird and unattractive. I also know you said it wasn't finished yet, but I'm still going to dock you a point for having a lame outro for the song. It just kind of felt like the song died at the end.
If you want higher score, submit finished work. I can tell you have the talent. Good job.
3/5
4.25 / 5.00 (- 0.036)