Lonely, then just alone

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Two parts. First one's, lamenting, and echoey. Second half's more upbeat, a little dance-ish, and maybe dizzying. Oh, and girls kinda suck sometimes. Yes, literally too but, mainly because they make me all emotional and shit. I'm still tough though. I'm real macho. You'd look at me and be like, "Yo, this guy is hard, man. Girls can't hurt him, dude, his heart's made out of asteroids and swords." I'd be like, "I heard you, bro. Yeah, I'm a bad man but, I've had a girl or two impaled on my asteroid-sword heart and it kind of hurts me, too. I don't have a lot of room in my chest for corpses." And you'd say, "What the hell?!?!" I'd reply, "Funnel cakes are the best."

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One of the oddest, yet best things I've heard :) Good job!!

pookicker responds:

Great descriptors! Thanks!


Reminds me of being in between too medium sized montains with green grass in the middle of them and theirs a wooden bridge connecting to both of the montains and theirs a torch on each side of the montain Nice i heard this a long time ago but never reviewed it =P this rlly brings my immagination out i love it =]

pookicker responds:

I had to edit this, I must have made my original response when I was drunk.

The image you have is really cool and I can see it. I really like it because it reminds me of wave forms and the continuity of fractal physics. The slopes of the mountain sides, that parabolic "u", the torches being singular points, the bridge being the diameter of space between. Whoa... wait... I don't know what I'm talking about.

Shapes and sounds are neat.

your comments are funny as hell for this song

im giving u a ten just for that

and your song deserves an 11

pookicker responds:

Thanks for the brilliantly high praise! How much do I owe you?

Needs a Piano

After listening to the first 5 seconds, I thought that I was going to end up with some horrible drum-ish loop. This is actually pretty good. Very quaint, and the lyrics are nice too. Needs an unaltered piano.

pookicker responds:

I may go back and add a piano... but, I have a hard time with notes and chords because I can't really understand music. I have to play it back a thousand times using different strategies to get a sound.

Thanks for the appreciation.


Vocals was the something that I didn't expect... and the music... well, the voice adds at least 2 full points to my vote. Good luck in the future.

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4.37 / 5.00

Apr 30, 2008
5:48 PM EDT
File Info
6.9 MB
3 min 46 sec

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