Ageless -DEMO-

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Demo of a song I'm working on...

I'm kind of stuck, not to mention I would like some feedback on how it sounds so far.

Not much to really say other than...

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on the 3rd and 5th notes in your little set, there was a lwish not that sounded off key, and kinda hurt.
drums and stuff come in way too late, and sound too stock
try layering drums, like having 2 different claps play at once
and maybe with a snare
and 2 different kicks
i like your second riff you had, but things still need to build more, you need a stronger bass, if that was supposed to be a bass, and for the tempo and tone of the song, you might want it to seem slightly faster, so maybe a hi hat between the kicks
you dafinately have the right idea with this song in my oppinion, it just needs more to complete it

keep up the good work

SkatingIsGenetic responds:

Ok thanks!

Sorry it took me so long to review XD.

But when, or if, I finish this, I'll make sure I take your words into consideration.

Goes nowhere

I liked the first couple of seconds, but nothing changed until around the minute mark. In a song like this, that is way too long for the song to start moving.

SkatingIsGenetic responds:

Alright alright!

Thanks for the feedback.

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Apr 30, 2008
5:06 PM EDT
File Info
3.7 MB
4 min 2 sec

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