This song has a bunch of nice sounds going on. Once everything kicks in though there's far too much dissonance between all the instruments. The drums dont seem to fit all to well either / are too quite. Instruments need to be separated. Its too jumbled at points. At least the sounds aren't bad, that'd be more knocks off of it. Some parts sound alright, some parts sound good, others aren't so good. Ah well. Pull it all together and it could be something really nice.