there are many levels of complexity to this piece which is wonderful. It is a very large and wonderful departure from the original. However, I don't hear the original in it.
It develops far too long for it's short length. If there was a longer version that tied into the original melodic elements, it would be superb. Please fix this and release the incredible potential.
Fuck one-line summaries.
I like this. It develops nicely and has a unique element to it. Job well done.