Liked the crazy flanger at the beggining. sorta a little twist in the plot.
I think this should be a trance song, though, not a dance song.
I'm hearing a little white noise in the middle. I think u should use a compressor, which eliminates high "peaks" and essentially all the white noise.
I don't know...
It could've been done much better. Its okay though but I can't see anyone dancing to this song.