Well...I can see you tried and put some effort into this song. Although, there are a few things you did overlook or maybe knew...I'm not sure but it sounds kind of repetitive with the main beat / rhythm. I'd change that around every now and then even by making it one note higher or substracting a note to give it some more variation.
I like the things going on behind that beat though. It sounds pretty good. I wish it would get pushed to the foreground a little bit more often.
Mate this is Progressive Trance. Very repetitive, repeative, and progressions as well. I wouldnt just let the song repeat its self like that. Of course i had to add some progreesions. So every time you here that clap rushing and the crash ending, theres something added. You might not hear it but its added. This took me a very long time. 19 Automation clips 22 Channels, 19 hours. My results doesnt vary. I am dissapointed. Till next time. <(^.^)>.
fuck that guy vote till total like 3-4 not five cuz it does need some work and shit sorry man?