I keep coming back to your music! Although there was some clipping, that doesn't take away from the fact that you really do make some great stuff. I love the guitar you brought in halfway through, you don't hear that too much in electronica. Prior to that, I heard some real opportunity for killer piano tracks. Keep it up!
Thanks thats good to hear.
Control your clipping (mostly on the bass in the first 2 mins) and put in more variation and it'll sound better. And put in more drum beats than just a hi-hat repeating pattern through almost the whole thing.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.