Seems a bit repetitive. I'd work on switch the rhythm/melody in the back a bit even by just a single note to make it sound a bit better is all I can really think of. Peace
It's cool, but it is repetitive. maybe you should try a complete change of beat in the middle, and use another instrument with perhaps the same melody.
.. nor sure.
cool anyway. keep it up
this is my 3rd techno song but yeah its hard to make it flow with different melodys but yeah a possiblity