not bad at all.

for your first techno song this is really good.
i just wished the bass was a tad louder mostly cause i like loud bass beats, and the drum beat, it seemed a little soft when the piano came in and when the melodies were playing loudly. Also, moving my attention to the piano, came in hard against the ears.
now for song compliments lol
i liked the melodies a lot, they didnt repeat too much, i dont know what SRT - m1tch was on about when he said the notes were too long, the melodies were really good. the intro was very catchy and the drums were good while you could hear them at a reasonable volume.
If you use melodies like this in another song, but with a louder bass throughout the song and a drum beat which you could hear throughout the song, i wouldnt be surprised if it was on the top 5
well done for a first attempt at techno!
4/5 and 8/10

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neat .

cool tune :)
This site has some weird stuff but out of it there are some interetsing songs.
This is one of them.

nice work

1:28 the piano is a bit brutal (entering in) and overshadowing everything else.

Awesome.

Nice bassline and good progression, keep it up.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.

Awesome

I think its quite pleasant to the ears! However i do feel the bass is working at times but cuts out a lot. Maybe make more instruments for the bass.

9/10
5/5

Keep it up!

I liked it.

Solid bass and percussion. The only thing I would work on is the melody's notes are too long, and would sound much better shorter. Whatever though, sounds near perfect beside that. Great job!

5/5
10/10

-SRT-M1tch