The not-so-good melody spoiled it really, and the overuse of presets.
I can see that your learning pretty quickly, but well... yea.
everything just doesnt work very well.
Id say you should try re-developing the melody and try to cut down the use of presets.
Cant say its bad for your first shot, but, it could be better.
(I accidentally voted 4 O_o)
Thanx, yea i no it is a bit wack but yea i got to work on my patterns.