Sounds like you're a bit new to this thing. Parts of the song sounded well other parts felt like it was trying a bit too hard. In overall I think it sounded decent, really...I feel you just need to keep pumping out tracks and getting better because you will.
Your learning FL studio pretty fast. I liked the bassline intrument alot.
Word of advice: try to use and percussion instrument besides a bass drum whenever possible. A bass drum makes the song sound a bit hollow. Another thing, I think you could have used a better instrument in the middle.
Otherwise, that was a cool song.
P.S. I loved that bassline beat on "Strung" How did you do that?
Oh, hmm I forgot really it came off the main instrument I was using :D.
Thanks for the review kind sir
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