Nice!
Nice first.
Like.
this is an Amazing first.
good goin!
This is my first song in FL 7. I did it with all my own stuff (didn't use any loops).
Please leave constructive criticism.
Nice!
Nice first.
Like.
this is an Amazing first.
good goin!
cool first tune
not bad for a first tune. I haven't used FL (I imagine it's fruityLoop
out synch at 00:12
the "saw" noise is simplistic and repetitive
I like the change of beat in 0:52 .
please try making longer tunes, and align the notes with the timer correctly (or cut your samples shorter) .. and count to 8 with the beat while you listen..
keep it up.
Yes, I know I was trying to keep it as simple as possible my next song will have more instruments and ALOT less repetitiveness. Thanks for the feedback!
DJFlam3
Dance To The Beat
This song shows potential to become one of the greats. I liked the melody, however felt the saw line was a little repetitive. I also think that you ought to add more instruments including: a bass line for the offbeats, backgrounds chords, and perhaps crashes in there to add some more energy. This is a very good first song, and you seem like you will be a great techno artist.
Thanks,
Yes I know it is a bit repetitive. I will probably have to learn a bit more about the program so I can start making tracks with more instruments and less repetitiveness. (I hope it will come with experience)
Thank you for the review!
DJFlam3
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.