Not your best
Your bass sounds kinda weird, or whatever is playing. Something sounds detuned. I can't put my finger on it. Try to make sure nothing clashes too.
Over all you've done better in some of your past songs. Keep improving though and that great song will come.
Too normal for my taste, looks like a common dance track. You did add some nice effects but at the end it doesn't change the fact that it looks like one of the bunch. Good job, anyways.