I'm just going to reiterate
I have to agree with a lot of what other people have said. Like darkriku12 I think dynamics would have been a helpful tool. Everything seems to be at one level the entire time. I think the few slow downs that there were helped a little bit but overall it feels mechanical and almost soulless. That's what gives the most sadness out of anything.
A few tweaks to the dynamics would really show a lot of change. Decrescendos or crescendos will work almost anywhere in piano solos as it is a dynamic way of filtering dynamics. I wrote a song called Silent Nights and I added dynamics to the beginning only and they are very noticable if you listen to them. It will do a great deal of change to the song. I did notice a few here and there, so I'll give you credit on it. I think this song has potential for improvement.
Overall I thought it was a very beautiful piece that does capture the emotions of sadness and sorrow.
I like it. I agree with what the others are saying. But I think this song can be played sharply as well. The way it sounds with keys being sharp is as if you're bitter as well as filled with grief.
piano is too sharp, as in not smooth
A song to perfection.
This song is always awsome no matter what u say about it.*silence
LOL, THAT WAS WACK.
mate this piece of music needs a little bit of improvement. :P
this piece of music is only a little bit lame and a little bit plain stupid :P
so for your not bad work i will give you a 4 :P
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