This one was better.
Than the last one I reviewed, the singing just seemed slightly improved and the progression in tone was great, keep it up.
Kind regards -
Sirtom93.
The butcher and the baker
argue in the street
about the importance
of bread over meat.
Their disagreement
has been a long standing feud,
There's been no sign
of better attitudes.
And there's not enough for us all
that's why you gotta stand up tall
even though you feel so very small.
The priest and the doctor
talk in the hall
about God's existence
and if he exists at all.
About all the scientific dilemmas
and the dogmatic views.
It's just an old discussion,
it's nothing new.
And don't be afraid to say goodbye,
he couldn't hurt you if he tried
and sometimes it still hurts inside.
And the beautiful people
walk hand-in-hand in the park,
They whisper promises
and lay in the dark.
They just keep it together,
they gotta keep their heads.
They gotta remember
what they always said.
They just gotta keep their hopes up,
they gotta keep their cool,
they just gotta remember
the only rule.
You never know what it's all about,
you just gotta scream and shout.
You just gotta let it out,
you just gotta let it out.
This one was better.
Than the last one I reviewed, the singing just seemed slightly improved and the progression in tone was great, keep it up.
Kind regards -
Sirtom93.
Thanks.
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