for a first submission this is fantastic. it would be good in a video game. in fact I have one planned that may have a desert ruins-like area. I might use this.
.. for what it is. but that cymbal gets pretty annoying and repetitive.. perhaps go a little easier on it? apart from that its got some fair decent potential. keep it up
Thanks for review. I've toned it down a bit, and I think its definitely less piercing than it was before.
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MAH BOII @ 00:04
Link my boy!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.