Still some mistakes. Drums are better on this one.
Feel free to leave feedback, just realize that this IS NOT THE FINISHED SONG!
Please dont vote unless you have heard the whole song, but vote it whatever you think is fair (even if that means you think it sucks)
Leave CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM! NOT HATEMAIL!
Alright, thats it, enjoy!
Excellent Soloing
It may be unfinished, but the riffery at the beginning is reminiscent of a cross between Black Sabbath and Pantera, which is to say it's heavy as hell. You break the death march with a lyrical stab of lead guitar, then finish with a great little solo that seems to use a traditional kind of scale. Overall, I'd say that this and Pensive are your best submissions.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
ZephMan 
