Venetian Stares at the Stares with lots of flares?
I agree, the piano needs some space to it, so you should throw it in some reverb, with turning the mid down a lil along with the low and raising up the high a tad to give a lighter crisps sound but still with some presence.
The bass was nice though, no complaints, except maybe making it a bit warmer by raising the low and putting a bass booster on it.
As far as the percussion, a harder nastier snare would be nice with a slight reverb, and more hats to fill the long boring space that it leaves since there's not a whole lot going on in this song, and if you feel like getting fricky, add some style flare and you could get the idm attitude with it. And for the kick, make it a lower pitch and make the envelope longer.
These are all just what I would do with this song, you can take it or leave it, after it's just constructive criticism.
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I'll give you a 5 for effort, plus I like Venetian Snares. ^^
That piano NEEDS some reverb on it, or some delay... or something! Its far too harsh, the melody could change slightly (at least..), the piano repetition is far to much. Even add a low pass to the piano..too. It just stands out far too much from the more ambient bits of the song. When the beats on, its alright. Work on mixin' it up - you made a 2:45 song feel like 5
ur the first to actually tell me how to fix stuff
i cant go back and fix this particular track but i will remember that in future endeavors
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