Why cant i make this?
Sure its not perfect. The general sound and energy of the track sounds so professional. Look forward to hearing more tracks like this.
Hey if you want man I can send you the fl file for this track.
I have been working on various remixes of this track for a few years now sadly i never feel the need to post them.
cheers! and thanx
Not bad, not bad.
You did pretty well. Here's the break down:
1. Intro: I dig the intro, was thinking that this would be a very calm song... but then you transitioned pretty quickly into that 160-170 bpm drum and bass beat... something I didn't like at all =/ Then after that speed up, you slowed it down afterwards after 2 mins or so of listening to that upbeat part... minus points for that =/
2. Sounds okay so far, but I think the beats could be much tougher. Punchier snare, and a much harder kick would be better.
3. One thing I noticed about the beat... it's not the usual drum and bass beat. The 'bum..pish, bum-pish'. It's fine, but you should have probably started with that.
4. After hearing it about three of four times, it gets a bit annoying. The synth especially, that main melody. Don't like it at all. But that's just me. To each his own.
5. Outro: that was a cool outro. Nice fade out.
Well, the song over all is pretty good. You need to work on your transitions. They feel a bit odd and awkward, especially when you're trying to speed up a song that starts of calmly like that, and that slow.
Beat-wise, it was pretty good. You could have done the beats a bit more justice by making them much tougher. They seem too blunt for this particular song.
Synths: they sound too annoying... I kinda cringe after hearing it a few times. Too high in pitch. Work on that.
Everything else is pretty good. You set up a good foundation in the beginning, but the problem was that you sped it up too quickly and too abruptly. I think it was meant to calm and slow. But that's just me. Either way, you did pretty well, and I congradulate you on that. Good job. Keep it real~
Personally to tell you the truth I don't like this song to much either.
But something about it just makes people love the energy that it packs.
I have done a number of remakes of this track. some without the slow intro that just gets dropped. others that go into mortal kombat at the end, some without the weird transitions and helicopter effects. and one that just takes this song and makes it go into a massive build.
I plan to do one more remastering of the track as part of my new years resolution, taking the best qualities of all the mixes and making this song sound professional. I plan to do an overhaul with the drums cleaning them up and making them more defined. I also plan to do a better transition and builds between the verses and I also want to custom make a new lead synth.
Thank you for your time to really review my song. I apologize that it isn't one of my newer mix's of the track. I will send you a pm when the final version is released.
Not my style of D'n'B but still a great song all together!
Thanks for listening!
Funny enough I am not a fan of this style either. It just so happened one day that I decided to just go ahead and work with the synths and drums I wrote. My friends bugged me to finish this project and I ended up doing several remixes of this song.
This is the second version of the track. future tracks of this song include larger climaxes and even a transition into mortal kombat.
It's awsome... just when your getting really well into the fats beat... it goes flat and slow... it kinda spoils i but nether the less mate 10/10
Thanks For the review!
This is an early version of the song. Newer versions of this song do some insane breaks and builds in the flat areas. If you want to listen to one of my other versions just pm me with an email.
Thanks again and see you around!
slow...slow...slow...and then BAM
that first transition was a little abrupt but awesome song nonetheless.
a newer make of this song which i wasn't as satisfied with. had a really funky first transition. after a while of comparing I stuck to the original.
Thanks for the review! I like how you commented in the title about how the song just punches in.
see you around!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.