gud, I suppose

Iz gud, but it really doesn't have the flare. The start is decent, but after the first thing, it sounds like a screech and it kinda hurts my ears. On the 3rd chorus it's okay, but overall, it isn't that well made. Normally this song makes a fire in my heart burn wild, but this just hurt my ears =/
3/5. . .. OWCH! I mean 2/5

Ok... ugh...

I assume that the second round being distorted in the melody is purposeful, but your harmony doesn't match the melody, it's out-of tune.
However, the only good aspect of this song is that, unlike any other loop I've heard, this one actually flows from the ending back to the beginning, and there isn't a space at the end to throw it off.
Needs more work than needed to get the current quality, but it loops well.
Therefore, you don't need to die in a fire.
3/10, 1/5.

not as good

there is a lot of good and a lot of bad song of storms things here. this is on the edge of that, leaning toards bad.
and how do you make a song in PAINT?

Lol shut up noobs.

I don't see you two with any songs or flashes you made yourself. :P

Anyway, about your song...

Some of the tune sounds a bit out of place, but it's ok.

I don't believe this

You killed it. Literally. And no, this song didn't die when people started to make music for free. I've heard tons of good remixes of this song, but this ain't one of them. You've got a lot of false notes in there, and it isn't really a nice song to listen to.

It's so bad you actually got me writing a review which I normaly never do.