As I listen a story pops into my head...
A girl sits alone in her room, knife in hand, the blade pressed against her arm. She is going to end it all, the pain, the suffering, the sadness caused by others. But then she remembers that there are some who still care for her. Upon remembering this, she slowly smiles and puts the knife down beside her.
I like everything about this, its really well balanced, and everything flows nicely. Its not too overpowering but it has a lot of emotion in it, I love the overall feel.
I really like the general feel of this song, it seems intense without being overridden. The flow of the song was nice too, since it wasn't repetitive yet it still was easy to listen to. Really well done, I'm going to download this right now. Once again, excellent job. Oh, and by the way, if this is similar to Sum 41 (I don't know if it is or not, I don't really listen to Sum 41), I still think that there was a level of personalization and effort that went into this, so it still rocks. Keep on making good stuff, I look forward to hearing from you again in the future.
I was really trying to do something i hadn't done yet and i think i succeeded (I hope so anyway :P)
Glad you liked it and thanks for taking the time to review.
I agree with the guy below..
It was slightly taken (accidentally or purposefully) from Sum 41. Which is technically allowed, but it made it seem unoriginal
Sorry...it wasn't intended.
I agree with that other dude, im pretty sure you have just copied part of that song from sum 41's still waiting
Well actually this was inspired by some works by Clint Mansell as well as bits and pieces of Techno and a riff i wrote for my band a while back. The melody in the chorus does draw pretty close to still waiting but i assure you it was not my intention. Everything sounds like everything else these days, it's not an excuse but like i said, i honestly didn't mean it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.