Good, but needs work
If you want this to be a loop you have to eliminate the short pause at the end and make it seamless when looped. Other then that, good job!
YEAH, ill fix that.
Nothing wrong with the sound or melody, but if someone who makes games want to use this he/she would probably be very thankful if you didn't make a loop with 5 seconds of total silence in the end.
This music could be great, make it longer and make it loop nicely.