voted 5
This really isn't a bad song. It has great potential. Don't get me wrong, it's already a good piece, but there are still a couple things you can make a little better.
The bass you used (drone sound) is a little dark for the melody you've used. It kinda drowns out a couple sounds.
The snare every other beat is a tad loud, lower the volume on that.
Overall the song is pretty good!
Keep up the good work
This also loops very well.
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)
PS: Check out my latest track "Hard Sounds"