This really captures my mind!
The melody before 1:05 maybe sounds a bit random or indefinite? I think you can make it better.
I think teh Truth comes at 1:05, right? How beautiful teh Truth is!
Really nice and soft, could I make a trance version of this or something?
If so, send message!
If not, add drums at some point, a slow drum..
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