you've given it too much distortion... sometimes thats a good thing but not in this case. Generally repetitive. Not bad though. Just needs work. How are we suppose to gain faith in your skills when you diss yourself?
Thanks for the comment.
It's one of my first recordings where I actually tried to write a whole song.. Which is why it probably sounds a little repetitive. And I've been playing for over 6 years now, so I know I don't suck, I just know there is alot more I need to learn I guess.
Thanks for the tip too.. I'll try turning the distortion and shit down on my amp and see how it sounds.