its offbeat for one, idk how you did that since it sounds like you used flstudio. its also extremely repetitious, add more patterns and make more drum loops. if you wanna make good music you cant have the same exact 4 bar riff playing repeatedly it never works, trust me, ive tried it.
also, since youre probably using fl. on the master fx track, load maximus and master it, that makes your beats sound exponentially better.
Thanks 4 being 100.... Im pretty new 2 this though and im not sure how 2 get it onbeat i also have problems with making my melody loop right can u give me some advice on getting on beat and making my melody loop right its like with this beat the melody loop alright but with others the melody loops dont run together smooth and can u tell me wut all i need to make a home studio thanks bruh