You need to add an underlying beat and have several layers of instruments in the song. This seems to be in a simplistic phase at the moment, but I'm looking for it to build up ontop of itself and reach a climax. Keep revising it and this could take off.
IT's ok but..
It's a good start...now jack in a few samples and boost the speed a tiny bit and it should be PERFECT
this is poopy
the main melody does not help this song from being boring and repetitive. As far as you experimenting this sounds like it took all of 10 minutes to make.
i'd say the name of the song doesn't really fit the song its self but thats another story. The one instrument song with the occasional cymbol hit isn't going to really wow alot of people here on NG and i'm a nicer reviewer so i'll tell you its alright you JUST NEED To practice some more and get better! This song does need alot of work. Don't get discouraged though! Just find your sound keep on it and next thing you know you'll be doing better here on NG!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.