Good song.

This song includes great vocals and lyrics. The only problem is that it gets a bit repetitive. The drums helped the song out with it's varied riffs and rolls. Overall good song with great vocals and percussion.

Meh

The double bass rolls really don't go with the pace of the song at all, though it did sound a bit better when the snare came in.
The lyrics got quite annoying after a while. I think it would have sounded good for an intro, but it kept going and got a bit too repetitive for my taste.
Overall, I'd say that this song has much more potential than the two you submitted last week. I'm sure if you keep at it you'll be able to come up with some pretty cool heavy metal stuff. :)

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Why the long length

That was far to long i dont undersand why it was so long.

Whilst the first was had a kind of funny value to it. This was just terrible, it went off for ,to long. The words are obsene but no funny they dont offend ,me they just seem immature no offense. The use of the long time meant we hear more words ,the voice added some bits with gay parts. Making for a poitless entry. The beat and loud music was alful ,it was totally tuneless. The long length made no sense he did ,not need to go on for that long. No humor or wit unlike the first one.

Despite the bad song it was not to bad to listen, to. Just more thought and idea to the lyrics, would have helped.

Ovreall a bad song

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Are you Jason?

So we've seen some improvement, compared to Jason I, there are some issues with the feedback in the first few seconds of the track that I'd really take some time to tidy up, as it will make the instruments sound a lot better.

As for the lyrics, they are so perverted and wrong, that they make Eminem look like a church going prude. You've got some issues and I think that you really need to take some time to come up with something that suits this type of music, rather than going on about wanting to suck a guy's titties.

Failing that, pass the metal tunes that you've created on to friends and get them to come up with some lyrics for you and that would certainly help - they aren't your strong point, so outside help may be neccessary.

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0:01-0:11 was okay, but, SRSLY, WHAT THE F**K was 0:15-1:00, this song needs some skills, srsly.