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Uploaded
Apr 14, 2008 | 5:39 PM EDT
File Info
Song
1.9 MB
2 min 2 sec
Score
3.76 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 3.76 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
626 Plays | 77 Downloads
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Genres:
Other - Miscellaneous
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Author Comments

My first music ever. i hope you guys like it.

Didn't know what genre it was so i just put it in the Misc section.

Please avoid comments like "0h 3M G33!! 1t 5UX !!!11!one!!". Constructive comments are welcome.

My email is kyanadien@yahoo.ca
My msn is kyanadien@yahoo.ca

Reviews


kevs91kevs91

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

A good starting point.

Alright, your first song ever. That's pretty awesome, first off.

Secondly, I think you've got a lot of things going for you, the best of which is musical direction. I really like how you've got some pent-up energy here, especially in the percussion, but you never allow it to become that same generic garbage techno we've all heard a million times. You've also got a lot of ambient tendencies, but you never allow me to snooze off like I'm prone to during some of those completely boring pure ambiance songs. So I think you've got the right idea genre-wise, and as long as you stay away from trying to emulate most of the music here on newgrounds I think you've got a lot of good music ahead of you.

That said, you're really not there yet (and you probably shouldn't be). I don't really like the background progression melody you have going on most of the time... it doesn't really flow the way it probably should. The arpish melodies are a bit cheesy too. Work on composition definitely, but I don't think anyone has good composition coming out of the gate. I think you've got the right idea with combining different sounds to create a nice texture; but really work on making those sounds your own. I think I can recognize some preset sounds in here, and if they're not they sound that way- if you want it to really convey what you're feeling, you're going to have to be very specific with the sounds you make. Some transitions, too, felt sort of aimless. Work on melodies, work on sounds...we all need to do it.

So, yeah, you're certainly off to a good start for your first song. My first stuff was throwing together loops that weren't my own, so you're miles ahead of me so far. Keep on working on it, don't be afraid to not submit things for weeks or months, just be sure you keep pouring effort into improving.

Good luck. (and a neutral score, because it doesn't really matter at this point)



econocrafteconocraft

Rated 4 / 5 stars

lol.

Make more.